priforprince: (genre)
Shikyoin Hibiki ([personal profile] priforprince) wrote in [community profile] voidtreckerooc 2019-06-11 02:53 am (UTC)

Urgh. The fingers press harder. “A verbal tic atop the commotion......This train is formidable.”

To be fair, a dialect or other such alternative phrasing is hardly as large an issue as a sentence ender. Under standard circumstances, Hibiki may be bathed in them quite safely. The combination, at this juncture, however....

The colors outside lurch. Hibiki begins listing to one side, unable to support herself.

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